Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend.
- Say why a driving license is advantageous
- Recommend a driving school
- Give extra guidance/ tips
Dear Rahul,
I hope this letter finds you in pink of health. It makes me very happy that you have decided to learn to drive because I will no more have to drive you to the parties.
Jokes apart, having a driving license makes life much easier, especially for people like you who have a hectic schedule all day along. The absence of license will land you in trouble if you are caught by traffic police at stop lights or a routine check. Moreover, you can simply drive anywhere for your work while saving money you spend cabs and it will also be fun for you to go on family vacations in your own car.
There are a couple of good driving schools in the area, which provide driving license for various commercial and personal vehicles. But since you are willing to learn it for your personal use, I would like to recommend ABC driving school because their trainers are very efficient and experienced. They gave me 30% discount on the training cost, so I hope you will get a good offer as well.
Although it has been ages since I learnt to drive, from personal experience I suggest you to wear shoes because the hard sole creates even pressure on the clutch pedal making driving easier. So, make sure you have a good pair of leather shoes before you go for your first driving lesson.
I really hope that it will soon be you who will drive me to the parties like I always did.
Take care and see you soon
Lakshay
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43346007605 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11087923133 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0973573992 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210262626993 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096298589535 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724626853703 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12022516171 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687967918965 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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