Your friend wants to come to your city and stay with you for one week for a holiday However it is impossible for you to accompany him Write a letter to your friend In your letter you should 1 Apologize to your friend 2 Explain why you cannot stay with him

Essay topics:

Your friend wants to come to your city and stay with you for one week for a holiday. However, it is impossible for you to accompany him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:
1) Apologize to your friend
2) Explain why you cannot stay with him
3) Suggest an alternative plan for the holiday

Dear Maruf,

How are you? I hope everything is going alright. Unfortunately, I have been invited to a conference in Chittagong during the week that you are going to come from Sylhet and will not be able to accompany you.

First of all, I am extremely sorry but it is not possible to spend time with you due to the fact that this conference is very important to both my academic and professional career. However, if you need any kind of help, feel free to call me 8801799581996.

The conference is over a period of one week and will have renowned scientists from all over the world. it will be a week long event, planned and paid for by my university in advance and as the Head of the Department, it is my responsibility to oversee the operations. As you know, running people is probably much more difficult than running machines, hence, I would need to be constantly monitoring the activities.

Since you have already booked your ticket to Dhaka, I suggest that you might as well come to Chottogram, which is a beautiful port city and there are lots of interesting places to visit. Email me at tahmeed93rahman@gmail.com and I will send you the guided tours available in this busy metropolitan near the Bay of Bengal. Reach out to me as soon as you land and I will take care of the rest.

With Regards
Tahmeed Rahman

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ned scientists from all over the world. it will be a week long event, planned and ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, well, kind of, you know, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60084033613 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02335669183 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7515632304 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239722761368 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777665640836 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530211859911 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132457480551 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450744999844 0.0580467560999 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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