Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your neighbours.
In your letter
-describe the situation
-explain why you cannot continue at this time
-say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Ekaterina Bots. I am a student on the part-time course of health and nutrition in your university. I am writing to inform you about circumstances in my life which will not allow me to continue to study in the same way as before.
Last Monday I was hired for full-time job, so my working day was extended for four hours. Moreover, my official duties were expanded. In this way, my job responsibility and labor hours force me to revise my daily routine.
According to that situation, I have to ask you about to change my schedule from part-time to online studying. If it is possible, I will graduate the course through the Internet. It will be the best conditions for me. I will be able to study lessons anywhere in convenient time.
I would also appreciate any information you can offer me for solving my problem. Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Ekaterina Bots
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur kind cooperation. Yours sincerely, Ekaterina Bots
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70909090909 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79426146832 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9280563477 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.7692307692 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6923076923 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202643288367 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727485365342 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623406018162 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122364500532 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357214362759 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.15 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.