Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent
Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter:
– Describe the problem and why you are unhappy
– Arrange for an engineer to visit your home
– Request a reduction in your bill
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection with the internet service provided by your company. The connection nowadays has become irregular and very slow, I would like you to look into this matter.
For the last 3 months, the internet connection provided by your company has been giving me a lot of trouble. The internet speed drastically reduces or it does not connect to the network during the afternoon and only gets back to normal by evening. As I work from home, this has caused a serious delay in my work, resulting in losing key clients and business.
I asked my friend, who also uses your services, and he is not experiencing this issue. This difference , therefore, means that there is a problem in my personal router. I would suggest you send an engineer as soon as possible to my location to fix or replace this device.
Since this fluctuation has caused a great deal of problem at work, I would like for a discount of minimum 50% in the next month’s invoice.
I look forward to your positive revert at the earliest
Yours faithfully,
Karishma Dave
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ould like you to look into this matter. For the last 3 months, the internet conn...
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...ork, resulting in losing key clients and business. I asked my friend, w...
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...ng in losing key clients and business. I asked my friend, who also uses your se...
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...experiencing this issue. This difference , therefore, means that there is a proble...
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...location to fix or replace this device. Since this fluctuation has caused a grea...
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...inimum 50% in the next month’s invoice. I look forward to your positive revert a...
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... to your positive revert at the earliest Yours faithfully, Karishma Dave
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...the earliest Yours faithfully, Karishma Dave
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... Yours faithfully, Karishma Dave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62625250425 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640211640212 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.2485615871 44.8134815571 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.1 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305820916648 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117582955302 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104334642844 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149703354245 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857799397092 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.