Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
• Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre.
• Explain why the centre is important for the local community
• Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform regarding Halfway Sport Center that will be closed by domestic council decision.
To be honest, when we heard that sad news we were really sorry as a family, because we have been regular user of this facility since it has been built.
Our family is really interested in taking up exercise , so, whenever we have some leisure time we go there in order to lose weight and keeping fit.
As you probably guess our neighborhood consist of many family that have more than two or three children.
As a result , this center could be seen an amusement and sport park to used in free time by our community both children and their families.
I am strongly sure that they will sorry more than we are and believe that it would be useless idea that it is closing in order to save a little money in behalf them.
Unfortunately there is no other fun and health center around our place so you can think of detrimental result of closing the center
We can face bad habits such as using drugs and increasing in number of obesity children in terms of children in the near future when you close this center.
Thus it can be good idea that you rethink of decision regarding demolish the center.
Your faithfully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e were really sorry as a family, because we have been regular user of this facili...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... really interested in taking up exercise , so, whenever we have some leisure time ...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'many families'.
Suggestion: many families
...bably guess our neighborhood consist of many family that have more than two or three childr...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...han two or three children. As a result , this center could be seen an amusement ...
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Line 11, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is no other fun and health center around our place so you can think of detrimenta...
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Line 12, column 48, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: increasing
...face bad habits such as using drugs and increasing in number of obesity children in terms of childre...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ear future when you close this center. Thus it can be good idea that you rethink of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, regarding, so, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56828193833 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30704108112 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9250800991 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.625 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 16.8248392259 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128186797898 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665694290129 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558786784934 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495467562855 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353536871068 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.