Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
• Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre.
• Explain why the centre is important for the local community
• Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform regarding Halfway Sport Center that will be closed by domestic council decision.
To be honest, when we heard that sad news we were really sorry as a family, because we have been regular user of this facility since it has been built. Our family is really interested in taking up exercise so whenever we have some leisure time we go there in order to lose weight and keeping fit.
As you probably guess our neighborhood consist of many families that have more than two or three children.
As a result this center could be seen an amusement and sport park to used in free time by our community both children and their families. I am strongly sure that they will sorry more than we are and believe that it would be useless idea that it is closing in order to save a little money in behalf them.
Unfortunately, there is no other fun and health center around our place so you can think of detrimental result of closing the center. We can face bad habits such as using drugs and increasing in number of obesity children in terms of children in the near future when you close this center. Thus, it can be good idea that you rethink of decision regarding demolish the center.
Your faithfully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: increasing
...face bad habits such as using drugs and increasing in number of obesity children in terms of childre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, regarding, so, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53303964758 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32971767968 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0557962711 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128186797898 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062941857448 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538924331214 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674253595022 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370978726681 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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