Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Give details of how you and your friends of family use the centre
Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir,
I’m writing you to convey my dissatisfaction on your decision to closing down the Sports and Leisure Centre of Main Street. We were informed the decision was taken as a cost efficiency minimization initiative of the local council.
However, we kindly request you to re-evaluate on the decision considering the reasons mentioned below. Most of the mid aged people use this centre for their workouts since it is located in a convenient place to the community. Besides them, majority of the children around our scheme use this leisure centre during evening and during vacation season as well. The parents, send their children to this place due to the satisfactory safety actions taken on the centre. Apart from that, most of the teenagers use the badminton, tennis and basketball courts during weekends and weekday evenings too.
The closure of the centre will adversely effect on our society because it will restrict ways in which we had to release our stress. The centre has also strengthened the relationship among our neighbours because, it is one of the place which they have used to have casual chats after workouts. If the centre will be closed, the community has to go far away to find a gym and it will negatively impact on physical and mental fitness of our society.
Therefore, we kindly request you not to close down the centre, but to charge a monthly fee from the people who uses it to cover up the expenses of maintenance. We look forward your kind consideration on this matter.
Thank You
Yours faithfully,
K.C.K. Peiris
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I'm writing you to convey my dissat...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...he closure of the centre will adversely effect on our society because it will restrict...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98859315589 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67850145067 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.2491739632 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187831468863 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670700484151 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600232800993 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110894405453 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08064626829 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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