Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
Give details of when you would be available for this work.
Dear Sir,
After having seen your advertisement in today's newspaper regarding unpaid job, which is being offered at your hospital, I would like express my interest in applying for this opportunity.
My name is Harpreet, and i am a final year medical student. Since this is my last semester, i am willing to have some hands-on experience with real patients before i join real job. Further, this experience would provide me self-motivation while helping others selflessly. I could do all the tasks performed by a nurse or a support doctor so it would be great if please assign me any duty related to these two roles. Other than this, i can also look after patients in the night time.
Although this is my last semester, and my assignments are due for end of the next month, i can start working from second week of that month, as my assignments will be finished by then. I have attached my resume with all the required educational and project details, please let me know if you need any further information from my end. I would be glad to provide so.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77551020408 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68171341474 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.138133005 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180921618048 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661191435729 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554042898386 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11090197052 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626957065234 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.