Famous people sometimes give their opinions on public topics. Is this a good thing? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many public-figures are often seen expressing their views on public matters. In my opinion, i think it can bring both advantages and disadvantages to people and the nation as a whole.
Firstly, due to the enormous amount of fan following, when a celebrity expresses his opinion on any general topic, their followers to support it blindly. In other words, these famous people have a special place, power and liberty to persuade millions of people with their views on any given matter. Hence, while it can be utilized for the betterment of society to influence people for a good, few celebrities are seen to use this power for their own sake. For instance, in a recent incident in one of the prestigious universities of India, where some rioters entered and vandalized its property due to some heated political debate, a well-known Bollywood actress Dipika Padukone reached there to show her support, however, it turned out to be a public stunt for promoting her latest movie.
Another point to highlight is that although these notorious people sometimes try to influence people for the good by highlighting several facts, it sometimes turns into a controversy due to their lack of knowledge and expertise in the particular area. For instance, On social media platforms these days, many celebs are being trolled for their dumb opinions and comments on social heated issues. While on the other hand, when an expert scientist or a news reporter provides their thoughts on general social problems such as poverty, corruption, increasing crime and environmental issues, most of the people take their advice and facts more seriously and make sure to act on those.
In conclusion, although these known people positively inspire many citizens towards several serious matters, avoiding orchestrated opinions, and broaden their horizons about the current affair would aid to this concern.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...views on public matters. In my opinion, i think it can bring both advantages and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20723684211 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73527401624 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.863020748 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.3 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214176115964 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884719246345 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358462414263 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128461931904 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292525514218 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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