In a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
Describe the item you lost
Explain how you lost it
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to report the loss of an insured item. Last week, I returned from Cancun, Mexico where I spent my vacation. Unfortunately, I lost my camera there.
It was a black Canon D1589 camera in a dark blue case. It is quite new. I bought it from B&H store only three months ago. The loss occurred on April 20. My girlfriend and I had gone to the beach on that day. When we came back to our hotel, we realized that we had lost the camera. I am not sure whether it was stolen or I just forgot it on the beach. I visited the local police station, but due to my poor Spanish, I could not fully explain what had happened. In any case, they told us that they would not be able to do anything because we hadn’t seen the thief and were not even sure if it was stolen.
The only thing that I can do now is to file a claim since my camera is insured. I request you to compensate me for the full value of the camera. You can find the copy of my cash receipt and my credit card statement in the attachment.
Sincerely,
Arthur
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.07692307692 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21003293236 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4441469116 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5333333333 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112307660481 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314312655528 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447260571003 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849043571691 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394227501558 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.79 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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