Some people think that prison sentences should not be used to deal with criminals. Education and skills training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by many that Imprisonment considered to be a permanent solution to deter crimes, while others hold that re-habilitation programs such as education and job-based mentoring should be offered to them in order to curb these criminal ventures. Although i agree that every criminal must be given an option to re-integrate into the society, several heinous crimes can only be dealt with by a custodial sentence.
Undoubtedly, there are myriad type of crimes, which take place everyday, and origin of these felonies are also varied as some crimes are being committed by people due to poverty and under the influence of drugs. In such cases, rather than putting these people behind the bar, arranging education facilities and technical training would be considered an ideal prospect to dwindle such mishaps. Further, these initiatives would make them invulnerable to the criminal gangs who invigorate younger people to do misdeeds. For instance, re-habilitation programs have made a plethora of minimal offenders capable of finding a job and overcome poverty which is the root of several crimes.
Critics, on the flip-side, argue that judicial custody seems to have significance for people who are psycho and ominous for the society. Having said that these people are a menace as they commit grave offends such as murder and kidnapping just for their self-contentment. Serial killers are the perfect illustration of such felons. Moreover, there are a plethora of educated people in this world, who commit various crimes out of greed and becoming wealthy. Hence, life-sentence is the only cure for such misdeeds.
In conclusion, though i agree that many young offenders hold a chance to reintegrate into society by offering guidance and technical coaching, judiciary custody is the best method to diminish heinous crimes that take place as a result of mental disease and self-indulgence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3488372093 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92915130607 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0110667515 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157438051666 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535143811949 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446255277367 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888765739499 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599064517003 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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