Some people think that prison sentences should not be used to deal with criminals. Education and skills training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since last couple of years, many people have discussed on alternates to prison punishment. Few experts believe that instead of prison sentences, education and development of skills should be used to deal with criminals. While few experts opine otherwise.
Firstly, there are many petty criminals who commit crimes due to their weak financial situation. To illustrate, Hindustan Times recently released an article on how poor people end up committing crimes like theft or pick pocketing as they need money for survival. Imprisonment will tarnish their records and will have a negative effect on them for lifelong. Such criminals, can be send for counselling sessions which will educate them between right and wrong. They can even be sent for social work where they can attain mental peace and at the same time earn money for their living. Furthermore, experts suggest that individual's who commit petty crime should not be imprisoned with criminals who commit hideous crime like rape, murder or robbery; as they might get influence and commit sever crimes in future when released from the prison.
Conversely, if criminals are not punished for their crimes then undoubtedly, the fear of law and order will vanish among them. Psychologist claims that criminals who commit gruesome crimes are mentally disturb and no education or skill training will change their perspective. In fact, such criminals will end up committing more crime which in turn will accelerate the crime rate in the country. Subsequently, citizens of the country might not feel safe as they know that there criminals who are roaming freely in the city.
I partially agree with experts who believe that education and skill development might help one-time criminals to change their attitude. However, the above suggestion can’t be followed for criminals who commit serious crimes. For such criminals capital punishment can be considered as they cannot be set free.
To recapitulate, not all criminals should be judge on the same platform. There has to be different outlook towards serial criminals and the one-timers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disturbed'.
Suggestion: disturbed
...who commit gruesome crimes are mentally disturb and no education or skill training will...
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Line 17, column 46, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'judged'?
Suggestion: judged
...capitulate, not all criminals should be judge on the same platform. There has to be d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, while, as to, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35542168675 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66958393769 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563253012048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5299724913 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7777777778 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187672150231 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732963479622 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103581354204 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140609667028 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932425574382 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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