Famous people sometimes give their opinions on public topics. Is this a good thing? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Celebrities often convey their opinions on general topics. Sometimes it is not good for the public. However, in my opinion, when celebrities talk about common issues, they help create awareness among the public and it is largely good.
To begin with, due to their popularity famous persons’ opinions reach the audience quickly. In addition, celebrities have mass appeal. Thus it is good when they voice their opinions because it helps the issue reach more people. In addition to that many people, especially youngsters, blindly trust their role models and pay attention to them and follow their way. Because of this reason when celebrities talk about social issues, they help mobilize public support. In a developing country like India where more than half of the population constitutes youngsters, the opinions of celebrities have huge impact.
However, discussing public issues is not the job of a celebrity and oftentimes they are not qualified to do so. Also, it is better if well-known people keep their mouth shut on controversial topics that might instigate violence in the society. For example, if an actor gives an opinion in favour of his religion, it can upset followers of other religions. In the worst case scenario, this might even lead to violence. Therefore, famous people should consider public interest when they give their opinions.
In conclusion, although giving opinion on general topic is not the job of a celebrity, I believe that they should express their views in order to create awareness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13533834586 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64183821897 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2921748852 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3529411765 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312485742835 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101352715594 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707566112588 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17084324561 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370699886959 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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