In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
Child laboring is a serious crime in most of the countries. Poverty is the prominent reason which forces parents to send their children for employment. Also in some cases, children lack interest in academics and eventually they will start working in their teenage. In my country, India, although government as well as social welfare organizations working as a joint hands to eradicate child labor, few people oppose this legislation citing few reasons. In the following passages, my notion, in support of government, and opponents’ view will be discussed.
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although government as well as social welfare organizations working as a joint hands to eradicate
although government as well as social welfare organizations are working as joint hands to eradicate
it is duty of every individual
it is the duty of every individual
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