In many countries children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In todays modern world, the employment of young children has become a controversial issue in our society. Thus, a part of the population is completely against it, while others claim that children can have major benefits of it in their future life. This essay will discuss both views and will also state why I strongly disagree with any kind of children's work.
To begin, it is undeniable that the chance to get working experience at such a young age is the greatest benefit of children's work. Several unpleasant situations can be avoided in the future and better choices can be taken by someone who had seen similar situations in the past. In nursing, for example, this can be applied perfectly. Young professionals with experience from the schools and universities may prevent mistakes. However, paid work not always have positive outcomes for the millenials.
On the other hand, in most of the developed countries, children work is illegal and there are several reasons. First of all, the body of a young teenager can not tolerate the constant pressure of an 8 hourly shift, so it bad for their health. More importantly, the salary of these children is extremely lower than an adult has because they can not be as productive as a professional, despite the fact that they work full hours. From my own perspective, this is completely unacceptable and unethical. Unfortunately, in Greece, the country in which I come from, the children's employment is not against the law and from my own bad experience from working as a teenager, children's work should be stopped everywhere.
To conclude, it can be argued that there are several benefits for the community and the millenials from employing them. Although, the reality is the completely opposite of what most of the people believe and human organizations should stop it from happening.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...izations should stop it from happening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00325732899 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85627822302 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563517915309 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1836893389 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21308700579 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739993416971 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547031089019 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128661548841 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513880529478 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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