Recently, most medical practitioners were pre occupied in making money rather than concentrating on the real health benefits of their patients. This essay will discuss the two sides of the argument.
Let us take a look at a doctor who keeps on focusing on the financial capability of the patient. They do this as a part of their practice to earn more. As a result, they ended up in a failure of treatment. For example, a dentist may advise his patient to go for an expensive treatment, which is a crown, in spite of taking into consideration that restorative filling, which is more affordable, will...
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Sentence: It is an advantage for them to be financially equipt and stable as well.
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