Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth and resources among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizen themselves?
Now a days there are many countries which are facing serious problems of poverty,lack of food, education, shelter, and primary needs like cloths. Actually there are many wealthy nations like, Europe , Usa and canada.On the other side there are some poor nations like Asian or Africans.
Therefore, some people believe that wealthy nations should share their wealth to poor nations.Like they can provide goods like food or services like education. According to my point of view i strongly recommend that richest nations should help poors to overcome their problems and help them to get up on their own foots or to donate them money so that they can invest in thier country. As you can see, some nations are wasting money on useless things like fireworks or on sports events. Tt will be very useful if they give this money to poors so they dont need to starve. Unfortunately, some countries became the victim of natrual disasters like flood, typhoon, storm and earthquake. Most of people are in opinon to help the victims of natrual disasters.
However on the other side some people totally believe that government is the responsible of providing food, shelter or other services. Government should conduct suveys or start proper schems which can encourage the international investers. In the conclusion, the whole eassy demonstrates that richest country should share their wealth with poors in the shape of goods or services.
Therefore government should also takes steps to make its nation's life more better and provide every necessary goods.
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government is the responsible
government is responsible
Therefore government should also takes steps
Therefore government should also take steps
its nation's life more better
its nation's life much better
Sentence: According to my point of view i strongly recommend that richest nations should help poors to overcome their problems and help them to get up on their own foots or to donate them money so that they can invest in thier country.
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Unfortunately, some countries became the victim of natrual disasters like flood, typhoon, storm and earthquake.
Error: natrual Suggestion: natural
Sentence: Most of people are in opinon to help the victims of natrual disasters.
Error: opinon Suggestion: opinion
Error: natrual Suggestion: natural
Sentence: Government should conduct suveys or start proper schems which can encourage the international investers.
Error: schems Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: investers Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: suveys Suggestion: surveys
Sentence: In the conclusion, the whole eassy demonstrates that richest country should share their wealth with poors in the shape of goods or services.
Error: eassy Suggestion: easy
flaws:
No. of Words: 255 350
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 255 350
No. of Characters: 1260 1500
No. of Different Words: 141 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.996 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.941 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.343 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 92 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.384 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.366 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.134 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5