21. These days, an increasing number of people in many cities know little about their neighbors
and do not have a sense of community. What do you think are the causes and what
solutions can you suggest?
Over the past decades, the number of people who seem to be indifferent to their neighbors has increased significantly in many cities through out the world. this phenomenal has never ceased to draw public attention and provoke debates. In the following essays, the reasons behind this problem, along with it solution will be discussed.
The main trigger is the hustle and bustle of modern life. In fact, it is common that people are possibly engaged either at work-place and school during most of the day rather than at their house. So that, very limited time and zeal, which is needs for building relationship with other people. Besides, the other reason that has added fuel to the fire is the increasing of criminal rate. this is due to the fact that citizens become unnecessarily cautions and suspicious about other people, especially with someone they meet for the first time. As a result, these people tend to become isolated as they are afraid mingle because the undeveloped acquaintance.
To tackle this problem, it is the authorities who should take proactive action. they are recommended that organizing community group could help people opportunities find others with same interest and share common passions, that is very effective to encourage the relationship among neighbors. Furthermore, changing the life-style of citizens are also necessary. The people should spend more time for acquainting others living next door instead of isolating themselves in private area.
In conclusion, there are subjective and objective factor accountable for apathetic life-style of citizens. solutions to this require concerted effort from both governments and residents as mentioned above
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39622641509 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7964683011 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9481706887 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0771191582052 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227557855057 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377452414924 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429868377255 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342594371013 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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