According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world- wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction.
How far do you agree with this opinion?
In today's modern day, internet is a wonderful tool to keep in touch wherever we are. Many people are concerned about the impact that internet have on our lives. I stronghly agree with them, although internet has increased the level of communication, it also has detrimental effect on the quality of social interaction(that take place).
First, let us consider the benefit the internet have on our daily life. The internet usage has increased the level of communication. In the past communication was only possibile by phone or mail, wich entailed time and expensive. Nowadays, with the advent of the internet this has changed drammatically. Skype, Facebook and Instagram have created communities that are global in scale. For example, when my friend went to Australia, he was able to reassure his family using social networks sites.
Second, I sadly say that this has had negative impact on social interaction. People, especially younger generation, spend most of their time online, chatting and on forum. Although it can be beneficial, it is not the same as real interaction with human beings, because it doesn't involve the same skills. It is important that children have and mantain real friendship in order to develop their interpersonal skills. Internet can also have negative effect on local communities, people spend most of their freetime surfing the internet, withouth talking with their neighbourhoods.
In conclusion, I believe that internet have beneficial effect but there are many reasons to be concerned about social interaction in our society.It is important that we mantain a balance between our online life and our contact with human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28679245283 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91679806109 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4188209504 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231134983801 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722941156424 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040338362811 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135628982044 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266826751075 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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