Adults always say life of childhood and school is better than now. Why do they believe that? Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays most of the adults consider their childhood and school days as a better way of living a life than now. I delineate justification in support of this statement.
To begin with, childhood is a unforgetable stage of mankind. Childhood provoke many buoyant emotions and movements regarding friends and study. Puerility is deliberated as life of freedom because this level is free from consciousness and children have no stress related to future and responsibilities. In childhood parents take care their child needs and select everything such as field of study and their expenses. But in new era juvenile are also not burden free because they have abundant workload of their academic field.
Moving further, workload is an escalating issue faced by today's youngsters and many responsibility has taken over the place of stress and burden. Being adult made human responsible for duties and relationships of family and friends and mainly for job. Every individuals have to enroll for a particular job with which they can might feel tension toward life and consider their childhood to be best. Youngsters have to take care of their family and become a breadwinner for their family expenditure.
In conclusion, i agree that childhood is a better stage of happiness but and individual should be optimistic in every situation with which they can remain happy and power comes with some responsibility and every person has to deal with the situation of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17299578059 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91326913156 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586497890295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8424429294 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152024693585 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559585166533 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728626090117 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112230326233 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691352340472 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.