Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet in this modern era
In this day and age, with the advent of technology, people are provided with the opportunity to easily access the Internet. In my opinion, this trend is beneficial for individuals' communication and knowledge and poses a great threat to people's physical well-being and privacy.
On the one hand, getting access to the Internet is advantageous for several reasons. Firstly, the Internet has created favorable conditions for people to communicate more easily and instantly on various social media platforms such as Facebook, Zalo, and Twitter. This can be explained by the fact that people nowadays can contact anyone around the world by instant messaging and real-time calling, which consequently helps them keep in touch with their relatives and friends. Secondly, Internet-based social networks also assist people to accumulate knowledge and therefore broaden their horizons. To be more specific, the Internet can provide us with a huge amount of information about both domestic and global affairs. As a result, by regularly reading news on the Internet, we can become more well-informed than ever before.
On the other hand, the Internet inevitably creates a wide variety of issues. The primary problem is that Internet can adversely affect people's physical health. More specifically, social media platforms are highly addictive, which can make people lead a sedentary lifestyle. Obviously, when people indulge themselves in aimless scrolling, they have a prolonged period of screentime, which can cause them optical diseases namely shortsightedness and eyestrain. Furthermore, the Internet can have privacy issues. For example, when someone posts something on Facebook, he accidentally lets people know about his geographical location, making him the target of crimes.
In conclusion, although the Internet plays an important role in our daily communication and gaining knowledge, I believe that it can cause several physical health and privacy problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64189189189 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98020465664 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.140472109 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145555803693 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593288309772 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042185450125 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914529987386 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377072106725 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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