A mobile phone is a communication device invented in the 21st century to ease communication among humans. Indeed the mobile phone has changed man's communication experience and is radically changing our lifestyles as well. Prior to the advent of the mobile phone technology, communication by phone has always been for as far as the physical cables can get. That is what guarantees that you can hear the voice of the person at the other end.
The advantages of mobile telephone are enormous. First, users no longer need to get home or to a phone booth before an urgent call can be made, It has now become possible to be accessed anywhere real time, second, the device is becoming lighter and more portable and convenient hence, you can carry your phone comfortably in your pocket, inside your bag or even gang it around the waist. Third, mobile phones have become so stylish that a good one now makes a fashion statement, Fourth, the introduction of the mobile phone have technically eliminated the clumsy wires of the old telephones with tangles that have for years made our environment ugly. Finally, mobile phones today do more than just :phoning" somebody. It now has features that permits the user to exchange sms, it comes with cameras where pictures and videos can be exchanged as part of information sharing. There is the beautiful feature called GPS for location tracking. The gaming apps make mobile phones a relaxation appendage, social media apps and internet communication also allows the user to collaborate with others across the globe. The GPRS feature could be used to track criminals in crime fighting.
Despite the numerous advantages,the mobile phone has some drawbacks. First is the tendency to be addicted to its use. The device is so captivating that if care is not taken, one might get hooked and be distracted. Second is the issue of the batteries that need to be recharged almost all the time before the use can be guaranteed. This means it is possible to have a good phone but be unreachable if the battery is dead. Third, to be reachable, the holder of a mobile phone must be where the service provider network coverage is available else, the device will not have the requisite signal for communication. Fourth, the GPRS feature of the mobile device can give up a persons location and make it possible for criminals to track and attack innocent people.
I believe with more campaigns and awareness about the effects of abuse of this wonderful device, the disadvantages can be reduced gradually because from my view, there a lot more to be achieved with the mobile phone than its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ury to ease communication among humans. Indeed the mobile phone has changed mans commu...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ting. Despite the numerous advantages,the mobile phone has some drawbacks. First ...
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Line 5, column 671, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ture of the mobile device can give up a persons location and make it possible for crimi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89686098655 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72854755261 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531390134529 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.0 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0632400047 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243482000409 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836108098957 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076911890373 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154486707063 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494303354374 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.