The advantages of transportation by car is better than its disadvantages

Essay topics:

The advantages of transportation by car is better than its disadvantages

some people still do not know if the benefits of traveling by car outweighs its consequences. In my view,I believe that there are more advantages to using vehicles as a method of transport than its disadvantages.

there are certainly no means of transportation that does not come with its own advantages and disadvantages, so it is with road transportation. Journeying by motor cars pose some risks likes road accident,car crash, disappointments due to vehicular breakdown. bad road network is also a limitation to this method.Again, people face unnecessary road traffic congestions hence contributing to delay in some engagements.other means of transportation ,like the railway, air, and foot predispose people to a lot of risks like accidents, air crash,etc. For the railway transportation, it not the best because it does not stop or pick its passengers at their bus station, rather it stops only at designated stations.it can be said to be a slow means of transportation. Again,its route has been limited as it can only go on rail tracks, hence can not reroute.

On the other hand, Although transportation by car is not the fastest,but some people choose it as the safest.it has a lot of advantages .there is possibility of it picking passengers at every bus stop and dropping off passengers at same time.In cases of gridlock or bad road ,it can to take a different route. Moreover it is a very cheap mode of transportation especially when compared to other means.it can be afforded by both the poor and the rich.

In conclusion, car transportation will remain the most used means of transportation because of its safety,cost and flexibility.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13284132841 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46559496234 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8160410607 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.1 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301306023401 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135025389107 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778664777079 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22533362427 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579550960673 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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