Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
It is agrued that advertising is becoming more and more public in everyday life. From my point of views, this trend have its own benefits and drawbacks appropriate with each person and nation development. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
On the one hand, advertising help more individuals can approach the modern technology in the fastest way. Not only can new technology help human life more convenience, but also people can use that modern technology to develop their occupation. Furthermore, advertising also is the wonderful market for lagre companies or business which is the key element for the development of their country can marketting their products. To illustrate, Vin group business which been the greatest business in VietNam for 10 years, advertising is used by manager from vin group business to introduce their products to the world. A plenty of their products became hugely popular in all around the world such as electric car which made its become one of the most sucess companies ever.
On the other hand, some bad people can take advantage of advertising for their own profit, they provide the product with low quality to the consumer such as counterfeiting and fake product. Moreover, using advertising to deceive the believe and low knowledge of some people, the quality of product do not similar that one in the internet also they can use some durty method in marketting for getting higher profit. For example, nowaday there are a lot of KOL who use their famous to advertise the terrible product for citizens.
To conclude, advertising has both advantage and drawback, so citizens need to have enough knowledge, skill and information before decide to buy anythings from the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11971830986 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73168641911 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3661857822 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189795647036 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938816003799 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15406855189 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11887975227 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888320893981 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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