Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film. Do you think this trend is positive or negative?
It is agrued that in the past large business producted films, but nowadays individuals are able to make their own video. From my point of view, this problem has both benefits and drawbacks with each person and each aspect of life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearence of modern technology that the requirement of population have increased graduately, so this phenomenon is greatly significant for the society. Not only can people be provided various academic knowledge and valuable experience for entertaining which improve their mentality life, but also the socioeconomic will be narrowed where all adolesence have the same opportunity to appoarch with the interesting information. Furthermor, more occupation will be created such as marketing, advertising and suppermarket clerk, reducing the percentage of unemployment and homeless people in their country. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Johnstone Dom, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of europian nation where firms were widespread. The statistic showed that nearly every nation has got a plenty of achievement in their economic background.
On the other hand, we can not negate the weakness of this phenomenon for the people life. The information of some films or programs can not ensured by the government which have nagative affection to the young generations. Moreover many government take advantage from this investment for their own profits, numerous harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generations.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay this statement have its own strength and demerits appropriate with each peron and each occupation, so the state need to have clear plans to advance their citizens for the nation development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38062283737 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95208236543 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602076124567 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7339006669 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112400915909 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438928401187 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334288227781 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694344992936 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399191829346 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.