Film were produced by big company in the past, but today people are able to make a film. Do you think this trend is positive or negative?
In this day and age, movies are created by not only professional manufacturers but also by individuals. Personally, I think this trend would have tremendous advantages to civilization.
Firstly, the more movies are made, the more competitive the film industry becomes, which leads to constantly improving video quality. As long as big companies are put into competition with the individuals, they are being forced to enhance their techniques and skills in order to attract the viewer. These big companies will attempt to release more blockbusters. Take Disney studio, for example. In the 1990s, when Disney was faced with the emergence of lots of film producers, they tried their best to boost the 3D technology for producing animation. Several years later, they finally wiped out all the opponents in the market with the movie called “Aladdin”, and became the “king” of this field.
Secondly, if people know how to produce a film, they can use this skill to save their moments. While big companies merely focus on typical characters, movies which are made by individuals could reflect their own life, seeing more realistic aspects. For instance, they could record the daily activities at home in order to create a documentary film for some special event such as Christmas and Easter, and watch the video with their relatives gathered. Obviously, these products would be a valueless spiritual gift for the whole family. Besides, people who practice rendering a movie could be stimulated to boost their creativity on a daily basis.
In conclusion, I would argue that the rise of home-made video would benefit people's lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... market with the movie called “Aladdin”, and became the “king” of this field. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2433460076 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78950661144 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634980988593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7526649531 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169450833687 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586383583302 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469932390853 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956881006908 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03671569912 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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