Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
People have different views about reacting to hard situations. Whereas some people accept to live with difficulty, I believe that individuals should try their best so as to suffer from the circumstance.
Overcoming hardness is necessary for people to move forward. The civilization of mankind has been developing in this way, for centuries together. They keep working day by day to find out new inventions. For example, Thomas Edison, who had failed a thousand times inventing the bulb, make it light eventually. It is this mindset that pushes our world to go ahead. Furthermore, the “YOLO - you only live once” lifestyle, which is strongly supported by the majority of adolescents, leads people to get over all the hindrances. It is believed that the rainbow only comes after rains, which means whenever they successfully struggle with the problem, they will go on with the brighter days.
On the other hand, I can understand why do others accept difficulties. The main reason for this view is that their life quality greatly affects their thoughts. Family condition significantly influences far more the impoverished than the wealthy. For instance, so destitute is their family that they must depend on the low income for paying the daily fee, taking care of their child or old parents. These bills are not a dilemma to the rich, while they are a huge fee to the poor. After all, it is an individual’s life that they are aware of the most to address the problem.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be worth trying our best to achieve a better result as long as possible.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... that individuals should try their best so as to suffer from the circumstance. Overco...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, whereas, while, after all, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92222222222 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7638253218 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655555555556 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4552379638 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103704348593 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320479778588 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509992643285 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807206078303 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554773481647 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... that individuals should try their best so as to suffer from the circumstance. Overco...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, whereas, while, after all, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92222222222 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7638253218 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655555555556 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4552379638 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103704348593 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320479778588 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509992643285 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807206078303 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554773481647 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.