Air pollution
In modern society, air pollution has become one of the most dangerous concerns. There are several causes for this environmental matter, and some effective solutions are able to reduce enormous amount of fume emitting to the air.
There are 3 critical factors polluting atmosphere. Firstly, means of transportation is the largest smoke emitter. In recent years, as population increases in city, the number of personal cars and motorcycles has grown significantly. As a result, considerable carbon dioxide, responsible for air pollution, is released to the air. In addition, Coal consumption of Ger district areas in urban area is another reason. Fume produced burnt coal makes town asphyxiate during winter. Third major cause is rubbish burning. Therefore, smoke and burning odor contaminate surrounding air.
This environmental problem is difficult to solve completely, but still there are possible solutions to minimize it. First of all, in order to lessen gas emissions from vehicle, the government should increase taxation on cars and motorbikes as well as discount ticket price of public transport. In this way, people would take public transport instead of private vehicles. To decrease fume from vehicle, another efficient measure is to prohibit old automobiles that have lower assessment of technical inspection. Furthermore, they need to build complex heating system in Ger district area. If they can complete it, we would be able to reduce air pollution by diminishing coal usage utilized in winter. Moreover, in order to eliminate smoke from burning waste, the government can enact laws to control the burning garbage actions of factories and individuals, and charge them if they burn illegally.
In conclusion, it is clear that fumes generated by vehicles, Ger district and burning junk are main cause. Our next generation will encounter such problems as serious respiratory disease and global warming, unless the government and individuals take actions to protect environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, third, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51633986928 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93751405962 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.520094128 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8421052632 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234520370271 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717096603588 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114626128449 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158060473624 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121303457238 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.