All education and health care should be funded by the government and
free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
All education and health care should be funded by the government and
free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the contemporary society much attention is paid to state policy. It decides how much to spend on
each sphere of life for a comfortable life in the country. Some people think that health care and
education should be free for every citizen using state budget. Others believe that not all education and
health care should be free. I partly agree with both views.
Many arguments can be found in favour of the view that people should be able to study and be treated
for free. To begin with, poor people must have a chance to get an education in order to get a job and get
out of poverty, otherwise the poverty rate will increase. Furthermore, usually rich people treat serious
illnesses abroad, while people who live in villages do not have this option. Therefore, the state should
provide an opportunity to get cured free of charge.
However, there exists another point of view on this issue. To start with, usually people do not
appreciate what they get for free, that is why a small fee is required. Moreover, paid education and
health care may improve the quality of services to some extent because more money will be spent on
wage and the higher the salary the more qualified specialists will work in schools and hospitals.
All things considered, the obvious conclusion to be drawn is that government should find a balance
between expensive education and health care and absolutely free services of teachers and doctors,
otherwise, social inequality will grow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Free
...hould be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agr...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Each
...licy. It decides how much to spend on each sphere of life for a comfortable life i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
...ome people think that health care and education should be free for every citizen using ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Health
...rs believe that not all education and health care should be free. I partly agree wit...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...hould be able to study and be treated for free. To begin with, poor people must h...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Out
...ucation in order to get a job and get out of poverty, otherwise the poverty rate ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Illnesses
...re, usually rich people treat serious illnesses abroad, while people who live in villag...
^^^^^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Provide
...s option. Therefore, the state should provide an opportunity to get cured free of cha...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Appreciate
... To start with, usually people do not appreciate what they get for free, that is why a s...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wage
...t because more money will be spent on wage and the higher the salary the more qual...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01798561151 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46405765881 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6962929678 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464510342239 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165771734295 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164073970279 0.0667982634062 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143614028078 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157663597516 0.056905535591 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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