All education and health care should be funded by the government and
free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the contemporary society much attention is paid to state policy. It decides how much to spend on
each sphere of life for a comfortable life in the country. Some people think that health care and
education should be free for every citizen using state budget. Others believe that not all education and
health care should be free. I partly agree with both views.
Many arguments can be found in favour of the view that people should be able to study and be treated
for free. To begin with, poor people must have a chance to get an education in order to get a job and get
out of poverty, otherwise the poverty rate will increase. Furthermore, usually rich people treat serious
illnesses abroad, while people who live in villages do not have this option. Therefore, the state should
provide an opportunity to get cured free of charge.
However, there exists another point of view on this issue. To start with, usually people do not
appreciate what they get for free, that is why a small fee is required. Moreover, paid education and
health care may improve the quality of services to some extent because more money will be spent on
wage and the higher the salary the more qualified specialists will work in schools and hospitals.
All things considered, the obvious conclusion to be drawn is that government should find a balance
between expensive education and health care and absolutely free services of teachers and doctors,
otherwise, social inequality will grow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...icy. It decides how much to spend on each sphere of life for a comfortable life i...
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Suggestion: Education
...ome people think that health care and education should be free for every citizen using ...
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Suggestion: Health
...rs believe that not all education and health care should be free. I partly agree wit...
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Suggestion: For
...hould be able to study and be treated for free. To begin with, poor people must h...
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Suggestion: Out
...ucation in order to get a job and get out of poverty, otherwise the poverty rate ...
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Suggestion: Illnesses
...re, usually rich people treat serious illnesses abroad, while people who live in villag...
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Suggestion: Provide
...s option. Therefore, the state should provide an opportunity to get cured free of cha...
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Suggestion: Appreciate
... To start with, usually people do not appreciate what they get for free, that is why a s...
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Suggestion: Wage
...t because more money will be spent on wage and the higher the salary the more qual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01984126984 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47003648696 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9327038776 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3076923077 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313677159309 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108893460451 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082421463222 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945920933329 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787193300012 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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