Some people prefer doing the same things all the time. Others, however, think that changes are necessary. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
Some individuals refuse to try new kinds of activities and want to stick to their everyday routine. However, others are convinced that it is significant to vary some kinds of action. This essay agrees that changing life is essential for achieving new goals. The essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that doing traditional things every day creates the sense of stability. A person is sure of his or her next day while living the same way. This way of live reduces stress, uncertainty, provides people with confidence and allows them to accumulate moral strength and spirit. For example, when an individual is sure of the permanence of his or her workplace, colleagues and so on, they can create a structure of life that can suit their routine the best way.
However, many disagree and feel that trying something new can be efficient and bring new positive experience. People who are not afraid of doing new kinds of activities create their freedom and do not limit themselves in their desires. Besides, changes enable an individual to become a person he or she wants to be. Just some modifications can encourage people to progress and give new unforgettable experience. For example, Vera Vong was one of best sportsmen in the USA. But she could not become a part of the national team and changed her life amazingly. When she was a student, she met the editor of American Vogue and soon became a part of its team. At the age of 40 she created her own fashion business.
In conclusion, while the benefits of doing everyday routine allow people to create stable life and the sense of confidence, some feel it is essential to try something new and achieve new goals and experience. However, in my opinion, as soon as individuals are ready to change their life, they can be easily rewarded by success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...erience. For example, Vera Vong was one of best sportsmen in the USA. But she could not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76898734177 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63919307549 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3108137578 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151190672906 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528950548663 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565340181461 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975978605484 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386370438158 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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