Some people prefer doing the same things all the time. Others, however, think that changes are necessary. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
Many people prefer a routine life, while others want to change their lives and constantly try something new. I agree with those who like novelty and to take risks.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why people lead to a routine life. One of them is that they do not want to step out of their comfort zone. They prefer not to destroy what works. Also, the routine in some countries is becoming familiar. For example, in countries such as Japan, Korea, China, people work for 10-12 hours, then they come home and rest, and so on every day.
However, the number of people who always change something in their lives is quite big. Especially, nowadays young people regularly try something new, they change jobs, travel to different countries to find what they like. Their motto in life: “Who does not take risks, does not drink champagne”.Such people like to gain experience in all areas. They also do not get bored in their work, because they choose work as marketers, designers, where they need imagination and always come up with something new.
In conclusion, there will always be people who will like their previous life and they will leave everything as it is, as well as those who will not stop there and embody all the ideas that only appear in their plans. I have always been and will be for those who are not afraid to take risks in this life and try everything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Such
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62348178138 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26453717937 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542510121457 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3402639591 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100549143496 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440884344402 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327078897402 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708540726542 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280939699669 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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