Some people prefer doing the same things all the time. Others, however, think that changes are necessary. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
There is a deeply held belief that routine tends to have a bad influence on a person’s development. However, this opinion is not shared by everyone. The essay will discuss both viewpoints on this topic.
To start with, doing the same things all the time might be much more useful than it seems in the first place. In order to gain knowledge and develop certain skills on the professional level it is essential to practice these skills by repeating them over and over again. Actually, it is next to impossible to become successful in a particular field without hard work and training which includes some routine actions. Sportsmen are an eloquent example of that. Margarita Mamun is a great rhythmic gymnast and olympic champion. Not only did she have to undergo severe mental and physical health issues on the way to her success, but also she worked hard to win.
On the flipside, repetition might lead to stagnation. If a person does not alter the way they live and does routine actions without having a goal, it can lead to serious problems with their mental health and perception of life in general. New experiences are necessary. Changes are known to prompt people to come out of their comfort zone and broaden their horizons. There are a plethora of people who hate their job. Most of it is boring and routine. However, some of these people have the courage to change it by trying new things, opening up to new experiences. As a result, they find a field in which they enjoy working.
To conclude, doing the same things all the time might have both positive and negative consequences. On the one hand it can lead to huge success in case repetition is used in the right direction. On the other hand, implementing some changes might be quite beneficial as well. In my opinion, it depends on the person. Some people feel comfortable with routine whereas others need new experiences and adventures. Therefore, it would not be correct to generalise the effect repetition might have on people because everyone is different.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, in general, as a result, in my opinion, to start with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81714285714 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60582706523 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6224365117 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3043478261 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2173913043 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08695652174 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191397893936 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485275431887 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631990069486 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110074154466 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06277418532 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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