Some people say that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
At present time, some people may have an opinion that all criminals should have the identical punishments for the same types of crime that they have made. However, there is also an idea that each crime is individual and punishment should consider all its reasons and conditions. This essay will examine both sides of the argument and outline my opinion.
Those who support the view that humanity should have fixed punishments regardless of its motive provide a number of reasons to justify their point of view. One of them is that if people know that all their illegal activities lead to serious consequences and the motivation of that does not play any role, they will think twice about committing a crime. Proponents of such argument also believe that such measure will immediately decrease crime rate in the country and will help to create practically perfect society. For instance, in Saudi Arabia, person who has stolen something will have the punishment and will lose his hand. Moreover, it does not matter if the person pull of an orange or a car.
Nevertheless, those who disagree with the idea above present their respective points as well. That group of society that think that the motivation of the crime have to be considered in any occasion and the punishment should be individual confirm their thoughts with the fact that there are examples of crimes when the illegal activity is made accidentally. They assert that it is unfair to punish real criminals and people who are not criminal in the same way. For example, in situation when somebody hurt somebody cause just wanted to protect himself the judge should decide the best penalty considering all the aspects of crime perpetration and it should not be really strict.
On the whole, even if the fixed punishments are more effective and can create safer conditions for our living, I suppose that the justice system must be flexible and give people opportunity for giving the most appropriate verdict.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, on the whole, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97583081571 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54775403985 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2536419374 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369314764818 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118346882602 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914754326409 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221536170827 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628329947955 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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