Some people prefer doing the same things all the time. Others, however, think that changes are necessary. Discuss both points of views.
One part of society is convinced that the daily routine is wonderful, when another part of society does not agree with this opinion and feels the need for change. In this essay, these two points of view will be discussed.
To begin with, undoubtedly, many people prefer to change something in their lives and many arguments can be found in favourof this view. Firstly, the changes help in finding something to do that will appeal to you. If a person sits in one place then he or she will never be able to reach hisor her full potential and try something new, which can be much better for him or her.Moreover, change is a great opportunity to improve social skills.For example, when a person changes his or her job or country of residence, he or she must adapt to the new environment, communicate more with people,and join a new life.Also, changes in life accompany new knowledge. This helps to expand mental horizons and become a more versatile person.
However, other people are more conservative and believe that life does not need to change.First, they are used to their lifestyle and do not want unnecessary problems and inconveniences. Changes in life always take a person out of his or her comfort zone, as there is an adaptation to something new. Also, many people do not like innovations in life, as they are used to a slow lifestyle. Innovation always requires movement and the pursuit of excellence.
All in all, all people are different, someone prefers a daily routine, and someone changes in life. As for me, I always strive for something new and try to open new horizons and opportunities for myself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, as for, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78647686833 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75868892961 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551601423488 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.006110924 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147721246345 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626993752021 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609687318426 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912948757685 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311369105926 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.