Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things avoiding any change. Others, however, think change is necessary. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
Modern world is very dynamic, where people tend to be in motion all the time. Many people think that changes in life are necessary and inevitable due to the pace of modern life. However, there are still those who disapprove of frequent changes. This essay will discuss both views. Personally, I do not think that avoiding changes is a good strategy.
Changes in different spheres of life make it more interesting and unpredictable. First of all, changes are necessary to get promotion. Employers tend to offer a job to those candidates who are not only professionals in one field but also specialists in several related fields. People have to learn something new every day to stay in demand among employers and those who do not want to change often the subjects they learn may become unemployed. Furthermore, changes are necessary to broaden your horizons. You have to travel, attend different museums, try something new to stay an interesting interlocutor. Only having a lot of new experience, you will have something to tell your friends about.
Nevertheless, there are still some drawbacks of frequent changes in life. If you change your jobs too often, you are not likely to get promoted due to lack of experience. Besides, changing friends regularly will probably result in the absence of people who can help you in difficult situation.
To sum up, advantages of changes overweigh their disadvantages. To my mind, changes are necessary for personal development and getting new experience and bright emotions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'change'.
Suggestion: often change
... employers and those who do not want to change often the subjects they learn may become unem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12449799197 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87339223942 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1721149864 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0588235294 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255579528182 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919841907153 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668710605157 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162694291203 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336705957645 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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