Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things avoiding any change. Others, however, think change is necessary. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there is more and more talk about the need for changes in society.In the past time,there were people who were trying to change the established way of life, there were also those who were against changes and tried to hold on to the old.However, all people prefer to change and expect changes to be pleasant and for the better.
First, these days, only the younger generation in most cases gives full preference to change. They embrace change and think that change will make their life meaningful. Second, change creates new opportunities that drive us forward.For example, the development of new technologies is sometimes frightening and causes rejection among people. Some people think that proven old technologies are much more effective than new ones and, therefore, should not be modified. However, technology is not to be feared, because it is useful and helps in solving important problems. Finally, our life will always be full of changes and new discoveries. We must remember that change allows us to open up new horizons and at the same time make sure that they do not lead to irreversible catastrophic consequences.
On the other hand, people can acquire several virtues by spending their entire lives performing the same tasks. One is that when people work on a similar task for a long time, they gain experience and security in supporting the current circumstances. For example, working in one specific profession, you can create a specialized professional employee. Following his basic habits, a person does not leave his comfort zone and misses many opportunities.
Finally, from my point of view, I believe that human society by its nature cannot live without change, because a person is endowed with reason, which means the ability to think, analyze, develop, change. To summarize, change is not just a necessity, it is an integral part and even the very essence of the development of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10759493671 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79507601469 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623417721519 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8438164391 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259091305871 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770688325112 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658009759915 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133841309045 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369603725969 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.