All university students should do some voluntary work to help the local community. To what do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, there has been increasing advocacy that all university students should engage in some voluntary work to support the local community. From my perspective, while this suggestion still has its potential drawbacks, the benefits far outweigh the concerns.
On the one hand, mandating voluntary activities will impose a huge amount of pressure on those who rely on part-time employment. As a result, the coercion could conflict with their work schedules, and increase a sense of stress and burnout while being forced to choose between earning income or volunteer commitment. Moreover, if the student is not genuinely interested in volunteering, the lack of enthusiasm and low productivity will undermine the effectiveness of the initiatives.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that there are more upsides than downsides regarding this suggestion. First, it is evident that voluntary work instills a sense of responsibility in pupils. By contributing some efforts to the community, they develop a deeper and more sympathetic understanding of social issues, hence fostering essential qualities for responsible citizenship and leadership. Second, by actively participating in community initiatives, students could build meaningful connections with local residents, organizations, and companies, which means they have more opportunities for collaborative partnerships, finding jobs, and mutual learning between academia and the community. Moreover, the reputation of those universities will be enhanced.
In conclusion, although mandating all university students to volunteer has both pros and cons, I do believe its benefits outweigh the weaknesses not only for individuals but also for the universities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, still, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.872 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31555364909 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8740049294 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.454545455 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212861444803 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709681312131 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856176149332 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126252199932 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584912150361 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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