Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree
In this era of information technology, especially the development of the internet, it is a common belief that social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, etc have affected an enormous detriment to individual people as well as societal communities in terms of potential mobile phone addiction and social isolation. From my perspective, I completely agree with this point of view and shall provide the reasons for it.
First of all, people tend to be constantly addicted to social networking sites because these websites have miraculous but ineffectual contents and designs that can let one get stuck in them for hours without even realizing it. As a result, much of our valuable time is wasted because of it, especially for children who can be easily distracted from studying and their eyes are being wrecked by sitting in front of the screen surfing those webs. According to a recent survey, it is alarming that the rate of myopia will account for 50% of the entire world population after 30 years so there need to be stricter rules on the use of social networking sites.
In addition to the reason above, I also believe that social individuals and society may choose to make more interest in people online instead of meeting face-to-face in reality. Consequently, people may be more introverted and our community will be disjointed and fragmented. For instance, in various families, there is no interaction, or heartiness, just only phones to surf the Internet. Furthermore, youngsters may have difficulty handling frictions or rifts in relationships because of the lack of real-life relationships.
To conclude, I strongly believe that social networking sites have impacted a number of devastating things on both individuals and the community. People should have specific measures to solve this problem in order to promote the future of our society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18936877076 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96399142981 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63122923588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7829839267 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227831447697 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825632158867 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868421809381 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145777364452 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691042344278 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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