Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, during vehicle-free days in some towns, private cars, trucks, and motorcycles are prohibited from the city center. Moreover, Inhabitants are emboldened to travel by public transportation such as buses, taxis, and the metro. Personally, I suppose that vehicle days have both pros and cons, but the advantages of them are jar more significant as this policy can consolidate traffic situations and reduce air pollution.
On the one hand, it is clear that vehicle-free days would bring about several disadvantages. One evident weakness is that it would ignite numerous serious problems among the workers in the city, especially the delivery man. For example, the delivery mas may hardly convey goods on time due to vehicle restrictions. Thus, far-reaching consequences could result in a drop in customer satisfaction levels and delivery men’s salaries. Another reason is that the elderly may face a dilemma when using public transportation such as buses and the metro because of poor health. This could have severe consequences for their health, as they may feel tired, and uncomfortable, and can not accommodate the noise, and the crowd. Therefore, it is crucial to find alternative transportation arrangements for old people, pregnant people, and people with disabilities
On the other hand, I argue that the advantages would prove to be more worthwhile. First, using public transportation is a good way in order to reduce pollution. Carbon dioxide and fine dust are the primary pollutants emitted by vehicles that pose a risk to human health. Through vehicle-free days, the qualities of respiratory health and the atmosphere are increased significantly. Second, the transport system is further bolstered by the fact that the fewer vehicles, the less road congestion. Let me take the Car-free day in Vietnam as an example. On this day, there was no traffic jam and millions of VND and tons of gasoline were saved for other useful works. It partly solves the problem of traffic congestion which is causing great damage to national economic development, reducing labor efficiency and unnecessary costs in this current context of economic deflation and difficulties.
In conclusion, there are certain disadvantages in terms of having vehicle-free days but its advantages are much more considerable not only for health, and the environment but also for the development of the cities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39095744681 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0871038563 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4881301499 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.611111111 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328916215044 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933506033614 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869450212998 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202253958665 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838530438878 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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