It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people believe that it is important to take risks in both their careers and personal lives. While I accept that risky behaviors may lead to some drawbacks, I firmly believe that their benefits are far more significant.
On the one hand, people will face downsides if they are willing to undertake risks. One evident weakness is the loss of the economy. It is usually hard for a human to achieve their goals if there is no failure so in this case, taking risks may carry a threat to one’s life quality. For example, in this modern society, businessmen tend to invest in stocks, which makes millions of people undergo the probability to encounter bankruptcy and live in poor life when the stock trend goes again their expectations. On top of that, your mental and physical health may decline and rifts in relationships may occur if some extreme cases happen.
On the other hand, I argue that the advantages would prove to be more worthwhile. First, I suppose that failure teaches success so if we are willing to take risks, and try new things, we will pass all the hard situations, and broaden our knowledge, no matter how difficult the targets are. For instance, a man who has no experience as an orator but accepts to be an orator. As a result, his skill can be improved after a long period of time. Another reason is risks open the door to new possibilities. Taking risks is like taking opportunities since they can prove to be life-changing if people take them and make them crucible in the right way.
In conclusion, there are certain disadvantages in terms of taking risks in both professional and personal lives but I do believe that its advantages are much more considerable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... his skill can be improved after a long period of time. Another reason is risks open the door...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72297297297 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7004974111 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5853315293 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365425088624 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11143443004 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133333202422 0.0667982634062 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241394319692 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970277084142 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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