It’s claimed while the number of internet users is constantly increasing, newspaper still enjoy its popularity among the mass of the population. I completely disagree with the opinion and present my reasons regarding a rapid decline in newspaper as the first leading medium of information provider.
To begin with. Newspaper was the only source of information in the past which has undergone a change in people’s preference with television’s arrival. But the internet, the most remarkable invention of twenty century, has revolutionized information technology with lightning speed which resulted in further cutting into newspaper’s dominance. Although newspaper still wins
favour with small circle of society, internet gains public acceptance among the majority of people due to its fast speed and visual format in disseminating information to readers.
Furthermore, internet reaps the benefit of advertising industry more than newspaper, as it offers advertisers moving pictures that add colour to product sales compared to newspaper which is constrained by its physical format. Internet also allows advertisers to tailor their pitch to readers who have revealed what they are exploring. It also proves a convenient vehicle for classified advertising categorized in jobs, vehicles and real estate. Finally, the internet not only is a free service provider but also opens the door to many existing social Medias. For instance, people can install many applications on their smartphones that offer multitudes of service over the internet from advertising an ad to finding any service they need.
In conclusion, the newspaper used to be a great source in information provision, but the pace of modern world requires a technology to get the job done faster as the internet provides us with such. It’s a natural part of life that old technologies always take their place to new innovations as we have seen sending email is a replacement for letter writing
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...the most remarkable invention of twenty century, has revolutionized information technol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51644736842 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12142974723 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634868421053 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9912331257 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131886031099 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425069472617 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361508621028 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644830982751 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339827539572 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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