Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news? Do you agree or dis agree?
There is no doubt that with developing technology having internet contributes to impart and getting news quickly. There are people who think that newspapers are a fundamental resource of news.
To begin with, newspapers have a great importance in the past that no remaines nowadays. This means before network invention the only source for impart news are newspapers. This occured because it puplished every day new news and that make it very special. For instance, in my experience, i remember when i was a child, i usually read Riyadh newpaper every morning with my father as a part of breakfast. By contrast, today it is hard to see newspaper or magazine in my house. So, newspapers have become unimportant mean which obtain on information and freshly news.
Secondly, allows me to present that from an financial point of view, technology influences significantly on media which become the first source of news. In other words, if someone has internet, he can easily watch news live on newspaper's website instead go to supermarket every morning to buy it. To illustate, most youth have smart devices which have applications free such as Twitter and Facebook , they can read ne news about their favourite artists and football players without paying any dollar. As a consequence of that, internet has becomevthe strength source of news for various factors such as no money ( free).
To sum up, there are other advantages of internet that lays it as a huge source of news nowadays and may be in the future. In my opinion, i strongly believe that internet is a mazing invention in the world because it opens doors to spread news and knowledge on all different communitie's levels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96808510638 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74319672914 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5712301582 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259217402635 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093040009578 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379114202158 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161879452303 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179839826815 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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