Although most people are richer than in the past modern life seems very stressful and the number of people suffering from stress is at record levels What are the main causes of stress in modern life and how could stress be reduced

Essay topics:

Although most people are richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful and the number of people suffering from stress is at record levels. What are the main causes of stress in modern life, and how could stress be reduced?

These days, the stress rate in people working in city center have reached peak. Many says that a life in the city makes them be inevitably under by several problems in society. This essay will look into the main causes of stress increasing in the cities and propose some solutions.

One of the root causes of the stress is that people working in the city tend to work excessively. One reason might be they usually stay at work late and always come back home at night and are not able to relax or talk with their families. For instance, in Tashkent, most people sometimes work ten- or 12- hours per day, which means that they cannot manage their work-life balance. A solution for the government could be cutting extra hours and fixing strictly nine-to-five jobs. This would help reduce the stress level significantly.

Another reason is that people have stress problems might be job insecurity. It is clear that people are worrying about their work than it was used to be, because today employers and workers often sign a short-term contract and the latter do not know what could be happen at the end of the contract. As an example, in the Western world most companies have contract with employees just 1-2 years that it makes jobs more and more insecure. To address this issue, governments should bring in a law including only long-term recruitment jobs and therefore people will be less nervous about their job.
To conclude, in my view, there is no doubt that stress has an affection on more and more people by several reasons. Unlike authorities apply 8-hour job and reject short-term contracts, the stress level on people will increase considerably. An urgent action needs to be taken, otherwise the society might face even great issues than stress in the future.

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Average: 8.4 (12 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, for instance, no doubt, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8262295082 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41657360807 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9626601875 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304814235247 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109907154069 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537008769811 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191967670397 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223797122415 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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