Are famous people treated unfairly by the media?
Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private lives?
In recent years, the advent of the mass media plays a vital role in daily life. However, some of them have an impact on personal life as a debatable issue of many celebrities but I strongly believe that famous people also have the right to maintain their private life.
Although the mass media make an outstanding contribution to the routine life, there is still a dark side to this picture. First of all, celebrities will be at rick because they are followed by a lot of paparazzis which interrupt their jobs. Take famous singers as a shining example, many magazines or newspapers have lots of detrimental information that tend to affect the reputation just for fame. Secondly, based on the development of technological advances, people have their own smart phones, cameras and so on, that means celebrities may struggle with many harmful effects. For example, if their competitors want to destroy their reputation, it is easy to use imagines which pose a threat to their name.
However, many people argue that become famous also bring a lot of troubles to their life as a concrete proof. For instance, some idols attempt to show their scandal in order to make many people pay attention to them. In contrast, everyone has a chance to live in freedom because they simply do not want to reveal their information. For example, Keanu Reeves in the matrix films as a great example, he just lives a normal life like usual but he is the ideal model that media should respect.
In conclusion, I completely believe that the mass media nowadays has not given the truth about celebrities. Besides that, they deserve to keep their own secret even if they are people of the public.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81660899654 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57850250795 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0484101277 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.076923077 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302892477919 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102334736513 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043218985793 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182965840411 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275345565858 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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