Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies.
How does competitiveness affect individuals?
Is it a positive or negative trend?
Based on a steep rise in the population growth in recent years, people are struggled with many competitors in their job and other fields as a concrete proof. While it may affects the purpose of many people, I completely believe that the competition is essential in any circumstance.
There are two key factors of competitiveness that have an impact on human kind.
First of all, people are interrupted with the competitors in the communal activities which makes them feel frustrated. Nowadays employers have to collaborate on their jobs due to the decrease of the opportunities at work. For example, officers devoted themselves to their companies but they will be fired anytime when their leaders find out some better alternative staff. Secondly, although many people think that the competition may encourage the quality of workers, many scientists concretely prove that they will be vulnerable. Therefore, the proportion of unemployment is rising dramatically as a debatable issue.
However, in spite of the drawbacks of competitiveness, people can not deny that there are still many outstanding benefits in this circumstance. Firstly, it may strengthen the knowledge of workers because they have to become unique and superior to others. According to the analysis of many economist, the competitor is essential which support people try their best to achieve their goals. In addition, in the school students must realize that they should enhance their understanding to get a high score because of their classmates are also rivals.
In conclusion, competitiveness may pose a threat to the opportunities of many people but there is no doubt that it is necessary to promote people and it pave the way for the sake of the fair world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24372759857 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08209550493 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8675142039 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0769230769 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130144705625 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470363003632 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491486989363 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872566119657 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386169508847 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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