Are teenagers nowadays addicted to social media ? Why or Why not ?
Social media - the convergence of information sources becomes a miniature world that is interesting to everyone, especially teenagers. On social media, there are many different types of entertainment that many teenagers abuse, leading to addiction and becoming a hot issue that people are extremely pressing. And this essay will discuss the reasons for my view as follows.
Many reasons are leading to social media addiction, but mainly because teenagers are not aware of the negative side of social media, they are also playful, curious, hyperactive, and want to prove themselves to the people around them. Parents have not closely managed their children, and are still lacking in their children's education. Besides, young people who have problems with communication look to social media as a solution to escape the rejection and potential anxiety of interpersonal contact in real life.
Another reason to mention is the outbreak of the COVID-19 epidemic, we have to go through a period of social distancing when we have to stay at home and isolate ourselves from everyone. Many people want to know more information about their relatives and about the progress of the disease, so the traffic on social networks skyrocketed. The number of people studying and working online is higher than ever. Therefore, more and more teenagers spend more time on social networks.
In conclusion, social media addiction can lead to many negative consequences for teenagers. It can lead to neglect of learning, drop out, and affect the future of teenagers. They need to learn how to use social media wisely and stay away from social media addiction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...active, and want to prove themselves to the people around them. Parents have not closely managed their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, still, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25095057034 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75834311251 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5073114097 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233856522352 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846646845849 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757811921166 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153899520125 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446586622583 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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