Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development
It is common nowadays that a rising number of adults and students choosing home as the workplace owing that technology has spread widely over the world. In my standpoint, distance working and studying bring us both negative and positive impacts. This essay would discuss two sides of this phenomenon.
There is no denying that working from home provides us with flexibility and convenience. People who work from home do not need to go to the office on a daily basis and then be stuck in traffic congestion; hence, they could save a huge amount of time commuting back and forth to work. Moreover, distance working enables adults to devote more time with their children and spouse, which strengthens their family relationship. Last but not least, if people worked and studied at home, they could be in total control of their working environment and schedule so that they can feel more comfortable to work and study most efficiently.
Apart from its pros, working and studying at home also have a number of cons. Since human is a social animal, staying at home all day alone could make people suffer from the feeling of loneliness and isolation, which may bring some mental health problems. Another issue is that if people worked and studied from a distance, they would have less chance to interact and communicate directly with their colleagues and clients. As a result, children and adults meet difficulties developing their social skills. Additionally, home is an informal environment which makes people easily distracted by things like movies or video games. Consequently, the quality of work became lower than working and studying at office and college.
In summary, distance working and distance learning allows us to be more flexible in work and more convenient in private life. However, it also brings some problems such as mental health illness,the lack of social skills and the decrease in work quality.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: COMMUTE_BACK_AND_FORTH[1]
Message: Use simply 'commuting'.
Suggestion: commuting
..., they could save a huge amount of time commuting back and forth to work. Moreover, distance working ena...
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Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that if people worked and studied from a distance, they would have less chance to...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivate life. However, it also brings some problems such as mental health illness,t...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... problems such as mental health illness,the lack of social skills and the decrease ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, apart from, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06962025316 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60691892429 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579113924051 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0993827117 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305058617717 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10196764639 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493987883991 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175862284796 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447427037856 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: COMMUTE_BACK_AND_FORTH[1]
Message: Use simply 'commuting'.
Suggestion: commuting
..., they could save a huge amount of time commuting back and forth to work. Moreover, distance working ena...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that if people worked and studied from a distance, they would have less chance to...
^^
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivate life. However, it also brings some problems such as mental health illness,t...
^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... problems such as mental health illness,the lack of social skills and the decrease ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, apart from, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06962025316 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60691892429 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579113924051 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0993827117 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305058617717 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10196764639 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493987883991 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175862284796 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447427037856 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.