The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices are harmful to individual and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of portable devices which enables users to be entertained everywhere they go. Although this kind of entertainment brings some advantages, I believe that it puts more of deleterious effects on both individuals and the public.
In the era of advanced technology, advancements in the entertainment industry are undoubtedly advantageous for some reasons. From an individual perspective, video games are served as one of the most excellent tools which allow people to get away from negative emotions whenever they want, either during breaks or after a long day at work, without having any impact on their productivity. Besides, this kind of entertainment also creates global communities for those who share the same interests. For example, PUBG Mobile has successfully hosted several international competitions and events, thus connecting millions of players, especially the young generation from all around the world.
Beneficial as it may be, this type of relaxation could take their tolls on individuals and the public. It is undeniable that almost all people, especially the youth, are eager to experience modern technological inventions; however, they easily get addicted and cannot resist the lure of entertaining with portable devices, thus resulting in eye-related diseases. More worryingly, youngsters who deluge with such daily protracted activities tend to be less physically active which can eventually lead to a society of people leading sedentary lifestyles. The problem is more complicated when the level of corpulence reaching an unprecedented high, causing the deterioration of health, putting burdens on a country’s health care system and severely affecting the government financial situation.
For the foregoing discussions, I would reiterate that the continuous rise in the number of handheld appliances helps each person in the community entertain with ease but it also exerts some adverse impacts on our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59271523179 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14557162531 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682119205298 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2285543939 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.545454545 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135753024514 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454476676929 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295701883045 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785085186457 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250862816233 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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