Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> In the 21st century, children and teenagers have a common wish - to be a popular in the future. Unfortunately often they do not understand that being a celebrity has not only pluses but also the minuses. This essay will discuss fame from different sides and then I am going to present my point of view.
celebrities usually have a good perception among the public around them. Everyone will be more attentive if she would meet such kind of person. Psychologist maintains the opinion that people are more kind and gentle with a notability, rather with other humans. It happens because of the positive perception of renown, which comes due to the TV set and mass media. For instance, fans love giving unimaginable gifts or make tattoos with names of their idols.
In the same time, fame could hurt ones mental and physical health. Unless the fans, haters are more dangerous. Occasionally, some admirers were offended by renown, then become the haters or jealous people don't like the person. So they can rush,gossip or hack the personal information and blackmail. Consequently, artists and athletes compelled to hide from society, wearing closed types of clothes, sunglasses is routine for them. The worst situation could be noticed with rappers, everyday bandits attempt to cripple or tear off, usually both variants.
To conclude, undoubtedly, glory brings useful benefits, including one I have mentioned, but in my opinion, drawbacks are overweight. I don't realize how it can be dangerous to just walk around or get some coffee with a family outside. As for me, being a well-known figure is to be limited in freedom.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, then, well, as for, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20146520147 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1173694735 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684981684982 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6431787014 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5294117647 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201166435582 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566445431129 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482817249132 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900519515104 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527454298549 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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